CapCat5318's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[NOT animator vs. animation(fanmade)]

really liked this one!!, it has a pretty cool chase scene in it!, cool animations and gimmicks in it, and the fact its all make in blender is pretty cool (blender is hell to use sometimes) though this too also needs some pacing, the starting segment takes too much time out of the whole video, the second part is where all the action really is, so you still wouldnt want to drag out the introduction too much to get to the good bit faster, i would speed up things like drawing the stickman itself and and the box around him, and make stuff like the title card and the time between animations of him getting out of the box a bit shorter than what they are

for the second part after he escapes, the pacing may be a bit TOO fast, like when the mouse followed him and clicked on the yellow man logo i didnt catch that that happened so it felt like it opened out of nowhere, but when he tried asking henre for help and his dialogue went too fast i think that was okay or even good pacing, because it was a futile attempt at communication so whatever he said to him didnt really matter so you could fast forward through it, but then the chase continues after it felt a bit too fast and couldnt make out what was happening, it looked like he opened a black hole at the end but it went too fast how he even got it, so you may need to try slowing that down

i think thats all the advice i can give, hope you continue making these and make them even better!, pacing is key to decent animation, hope to see you work on that, and dont be afraid to ask for opnions and advice on it either, practice makes perfect always

TheAlbinoCrow responds:

thank you so much, i was pretty happy with one constructive comment i could learn from, but i was not expecting 2 comments. Thank you for watching and giving a review. (:
At this point, im getting kind of confused at what's happening, since I've made things on youtube for years, and it wasnt actually too good, but 3 seconds after posting some animations that i actually like on newgrounds, 2 comments appear in less than 24 hours. thank you all for the support (:

edit:i put a happy icon on the comment.

[Stupid dragon jump on a rock.]

reall nice rigging!, i liked the landing but it just needs a bit of tweaking in the speed at which things are moved so they dont look to stiff

[recovering]

me after a long ass day of work

also you can post this as a GIF in the art portal!!

[Coder vs. Game]

dude what is this 😭

edit: oh i actually didnt get what was happening the first time, the focus wasnt really drawn to the stickman at the beginning, i got more focused on the discord chat section because it dragged on just a little longer than it needed to be, then when the stickman started attacking i didnt really get what was happing because i forgot about him a moment ago

to fix this i would focus less on the background stuff like the discord chat and writing code (not let them take as much screen time as they did ), and focus more on showing action like the stickman destroying stuff and surviving in the process, i would still show a small part of the coding and chatting but thats just to set the scene for when the stickman comes in so the places he appears in dont seem out of nowhere, thats my main critique

you do have very promising talent to become a great animator one day though!, keep making these little cartoons albeit they need a lttle tweaking but theyre great

TheAlbinoCrow responds:

a stickman fighting a coder, hope youre in a good spot, thank you for watching and commenting

btw this is my first ever comment so I have no idea what to do or how to react.

[Caught In Traffic.]

fucking

absolute CINEMA

[animation pratice]

absolute cinema

this was actually really fucking cool LOL

[Late Night Thoughts]

i love this blend between 3d and 2d :D, nice thoughts too, but it does feel so worth it when you look back at the mark youve left

also i would make the text go just a tad bit slower because this is too fast to read, still love it all :)

ALSO HEY WELCOME TO NEWGROUNDS!!!!, i hope you enjoy your stay youre gonna make banger stuff here!!!

bat0id responds:

thank you for ur review! I agree it could be slower, i appreciate the crit :)

and thank you! yeah i never even thought to make one until my friend already thought i had an account and couldn’t find me lol. hoping to see a lot of cool stuff here too

[boxes]

this is so charming for no reason i love it lmao

[butter [at 90% finished point]]

i dont think my man had anything to explain himself with