this was weird to watch to say the least, i meant i kinda like the designs and colors but its not as charming as i hoped it would be lmao, i cant really describe what would make it tick really?, maybe the improvised speech is too on the nose or overplayed in it, it just feels liek its missing an element, maybe its the microphone quality and that the music feels louder than the speech lol, also it can use some changing in animation loops and positions, its used a good amount but i think it could use more angles maybe, i know this wasnt supposed to really go anywhere but it also didnt really have much substance either like a silly joke, there was the moment with the shrek thing and the barry j gillis thing lol but that was about it, and yeah i think thats my critique!, hope this maybe helped lmao
it was a good animation though, happy newgrounding :)
just checked your other stuff and vore seems to be a common theme here, nothing really about it my points still stand